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anotherloverofchrist

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Posted : 14 Jan, 2009 02:06 PM

lol...you are right. Now i want to know what the light was.Do you write anything else besides poems?



No i didn't post one of my poems. I didn't feel comfortable posting it that way, but i will share one with you:



From my belly flows

Stimulating Prose

Eye popping shots

Toe curling thoughts

Arousing points of view

Fragments you never knew

How?

I hang out with big G

and he talks to me

Like rain talks to the currents of the sea

Cause i'm down with big G

Like the wind whistles in the ears of trees

Cause i'm down with big G

Like the dew sits on the lips of grass

and gravity holds me on this earth till i pass

My life here i know won't last

So i gotta stay CONNECTED, so i'm not AFFECTED by what my natural eyes can see

So i stay down with big G



Well, tell me what you think. I would love to hear someone else opinion, and please be honest.

J

anotherloverofchrist

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Posted : 2 Jan, 2009 10:19 AM

i like this poem, but it seems to be incomplete. Iwant to know whats going to happen next. Was it the voice of God? the holy spirit? A friend?

Did you recieve guidance from this voice?

Maybe it was a dream, or maybe and out of body experience.

Fill me in, my curiousity is waiting.



Jae