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Posted : 23 Jun, 2010 11:13 AM

What is it women like talking about exactly? It seems like all the ones I send something out to... well I don't really know what they're thinking or expecting.

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Posted : 2 Jul, 2010 09:37 AM

Oooooookay... new profile is writ (or wrote). If you'd care to take a look and let me know what you think then thanks.

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Posted : 2 Jul, 2010 10:28 AM

Brandon,



Really good profile!!! If I weren't old enough to be your mom, I'd definately befriend you. I'm guessing, you'll get more responses once you're on U.S. soil again.



Just last night, I had a friend ask me to explain God's timing to him. I can't. God has never stopped having a plan for your life. I was 29 when I got married. I thank God for all I learned prior to marriage. The more maturity you take into marriage, the greater chance you have to be successful in that marriage. I think that being patient about the future is challenging at any age. "I do not know what tomorrow holds, but I know Who holds tomorrow."



Blessings,

Rose

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Posted : 2 Jul, 2010 11:28 AM

WOW! Now that profile will need some traffic polices lol Good job Brandon:excited:

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Posted : 2 Jul, 2010 06:40 PM

I like it, Brandon. Overall, it's really good =) Just a couple of suggestions, though:



1. Alot is spelled: a lot =)

2. Break it up into paragraphs.



Here's how I would split it into paragraphs:

My name is Brandon. I was born in Oregon. I joined the Army a year after graduating high school. It's been difficult, but I've learned alot about myself as a man and as a person since then and have made some pretty great friends along the way.

As of a couple days ago (27 June 2010) I have come to the realization that alot, if not all, of the difficulties I've had in my life were unnecessary suffering as a result of relying too much on myself to create the life I dream of and to accomplish the things I want rather than relying on God. I may be mistaken on this one, but I feel like we both wanted the same thing (to be the best person I can be, and live life to the fullest), but had different ways of how to go about it and now I see that His way is by far better than mine and am learning to trust in Him for what I need more and more as I draw closer.

I've been in Korea for a year then got stationed at Ft. Huachuca, AZ. I'm now on my 2nd year long deployment in Iraq. I like learning about and working on computers. It's kinda grown on me since it's my job. While I'm over here I'm building my own personal one, as well as managing the entire network of the site we are at. When I get out next year I want find a place in the Phoenix area and finish the last year of my associates degree in computer information systems and earn my A+, N+, Security+, CCNA, C++, and Java certifications then go on to a regular university and major in English and philosophy since that is my real interest and what I have an affinity for. Haven't decided where but am thinking somewhere in Arizona, Oregon, or San Diego.

I like to travel and learn about the culture and history of different countries. I don't have a bucket list, but if I did the first thing on there would be to take a week and go on a pizza safari in Chicago and New York. When going for my English/philosophy degree I would really like to study abroad in Rome and Argentina. Perth would be cool too. That's the plan, as far as I know, but I'm sure God will reveal what's next when the time comes. I know I kinda come off as a desperado or freespirit, but I just want to live my life to the fullest.

I'm on here because I really appreciate the beauty and comfort inherent in a good woman. I know not all women are good, but I know most are. Not looking for perfect, just some one who is true to and sticks up for herself but at the same time can let her guard down once in a while. Honesty and respect are qualities I really value, both in myself and in others. I also know that without friends and caring people there for you to share and joke around with and understand each other it can seem pretty empty sometimes.

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Posted : 2 Jul, 2010 06:40 PM

I like it, Brandon. Overall, it's really good =) Just a couple of suggestions, though:



1. Alot is spelled: a lot =)

2. Break it up into paragraphs.



Here's how I would split it into paragraphs:

My name is Brandon. I was born in Oregon. I joined the Army a year after graduating high school. It's been difficult, but I've learned alot about myself as a man and as a person since then and have made some pretty great friends along the way.

As of a couple days ago (27 June 2010) I have come to the realization that alot, if not all, of the difficulties I've had in my life were unnecessary suffering as a result of relying too much on myself to create the life I dream of and to accomplish the things I want rather than relying on God. I may be mistaken on this one, but I feel like we both wanted the same thing (to be the best person I can be, and live life to the fullest), but had different ways of how to go about it and now I see that His way is by far better than mine and am learning to trust in Him for what I need more and more as I draw closer.

I've been in Korea for a year then got stationed at Ft. Huachuca, AZ. I'm now on my 2nd year long deployment in Iraq. I like learning about and working on computers. It's kinda grown on me since it's my job. While I'm over here I'm building my own personal one, as well as managing the entire network of the site we are at. When I get out next year I want find a place in the Phoenix area and finish the last year of my associates degree in computer information systems and earn my A+, N+, Security+, CCNA, C++, and Java certifications then go on to a regular university and major in English and philosophy since that is my real interest and what I have an affinity for. Haven't decided where but am thinking somewhere in Arizona, Oregon, or San Diego.

I like to travel and learn about the culture and history of different countries. I don't have a bucket list, but if I did the first thing on there would be to take a week and go on a pizza safari in Chicago and New York. When going for my English/philosophy degree I would really like to study abroad in Rome and Argentina. Perth would be cool too. That's the plan, as far as I know, but I'm sure God will reveal what's next when the time comes. I know I kinda come off as a desperado or freespirit, but I just want to live my life to the fullest.

I'm on here because I really appreciate the beauty and comfort inherent in a good woman. I know not all women are good, but I know most are. Not looking for perfect, just some one who is true to and sticks up for herself but at the same time can let her guard down once in a while. Honesty and respect are qualities I really value, both in myself and in others. I also know that without friends and caring people there for you to share and joke around with and understand each other it can seem pretty empty sometimes.

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Posted : 2 Jul, 2010 06:44 PM

Sorry for the double posting... Grrr...

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