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Aimee07

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Songs from the heart to my First Love
Posted : 3 Nov, 2011 04:02 AM

The lyrics to the first ever song I have ever written... Enjoy!



I'm Completely Yours



I don't need the love of a million lovers

I don't need the kiss of a thousand lips

I don't need embraces from a million arms

All I need is Your love for me to be complete



You held me close when I feel alone

Whenever I am down and daunted

You held me in Your arms oh God

and reassured me that I belong to You



Chorus:

For Your love is so astounding

Your love sweeps me of my feet

Oh Lord Your love overwhelms my fears

I give up my whole self to You

I'm completely Yours



Bridge:

What else can I ever ask for?

When You have given me everything I need

Who else should I ever seek?

Safe for you who has never forsaken me...

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Aimee07

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Songs from the heart to my First Love
Posted : 3 Nov, 2011 06:55 AM

May My Heart Sing



A thousand times, I'd like to try

and tell you Lord how much I feel for you

And A thousand times, I also fail

to put to words the things I want to say



And then my soul starts to cry 'coz it yearns for you so much

But through the pain it starts to pray...



Chorus:

May my heart sing to You, Lord

May it speak the words I could not say

May my heart sing to You, Lord

When all else fails and come to naught



Bridge:

For in my brokenness, my anguish and my pain

My words might not get through and I might fail to say

But still I'd like to tell you Lord

How much I love you....

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Songs from the heart to my First Love
Posted : 5 Nov, 2011 08:17 AM

Wow! I think you're really gifted with lyrics. Im not good with lyrics so I can't really offer u any constructive criticisms on your work. U really should join Christian Songwriters Network(CSN), a lot of them will be willing to offer u some advice on how to improve your writings(i.e. if there is anything that needs improving).

Have u tried making melodies for them? It really helps if u play an instrument.

Keep glorifying God with your gift!

Ken

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Songs from the heart to my First Love
Posted : 5 Nov, 2011 09:10 AM

Thank you Ken. I actually play the keys and guitar. :)



Those two songs already have melodies...but i haven't sung it in public yet....hehe :)



I have a couple of others without any working melodies yet, though... :(



I'll definitely check out that website. Thanks again! :)

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Songs from the heart to my First Love
Posted : 15 Nov, 2011 03:27 PM

Yeah I gotta say, that sounds very very good. Congrats and keep it up!

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Songs from the heart to my First Love
Posted : 17 Nov, 2011 01:15 AM

Thank you.. praise God.. :)

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