Author	Thread: A Ladies touch. . .
Thirstingforfire View Profile History	A Ladies touch. . . Posted : 24 Jun, 2010 07:57 PM Hey ladies I just wanted your feedback about my profile. It is not that I am not confident because I am very much so, I just do not get a lot of responses. Ladies if you could give me your opinions it would greatly help! Post Reply
GraceMae View Profile History	A Ladies touch. . . Posted : 24 Jun, 2010 10:12 PM Hey Travis.... I think your profile is ok. You've got a variety of pics for young ladies to drool over, and your profile content likewise, would make them think and add spark for conversation with you. Next chance you get, add a pic of you doing something out-doorsy... like riding horses... Remember too, you might not get a lot of responses because God is covering you... what responses you do get, pray God is in it all, working things to your advantage... take those that do respond and give your best shot at showing who "you" are and me mindful of what you're trying to represent. Have fun! :glow: ~ GraceMae Post Reply
View Profile History	A Ladies touch. . . Posted : 24 Jun, 2010 11:54 PM Well, I kinda dislike critiquing profiles because I think people should be real and honest about who they are... and I don't want to make recommendations that would cause the person to strip their profile down to something that misrepresents who they are. That said... Your profile says: "I do believe that physical attraction to someone is important." This gives the impression that if someone is ugly she shouldn't bother trying to contact you. A lady, such as myself, who perceives herself as being less than attractive, will not even read the rest of your profile. Even if I was having a day where I feel okay about my appearance, I would perceive you as being shallow... in the sense that if I were to ever become less attractive (getting wrinkles, sprouting gray hairs, having trouble losing baby weight, etc.), I would worry that you wouldn't like me anymore. So... if indeed that is what you're trying to communicate by that sentence, then leave it in there, by all means. But, if not, then you may want to remove it. Post Reply
View Profile History	A Ladies touch. . . Posted : 25 Jun, 2010 06:15 AM Hi Travis. Overall I thought you did a good job on your profile. I would add a picture or two taken by someone else, of you doing something you like. I agree with Pixy on your opening comment. For me, to read that a guy finds physical attraction so important, I also wouldn't read further. I would not feel confident enough in my appearance to appeal to you and would not read the rest of your profile. You mention you are interested in martial arts, but don't say anything about it in your profile text. That would be another change I recommend. Overall - like I said - I thought you did a good job. Just keep praying and waiting! Post Reply
Thirstingforfire View Profile History	A Ladies touch. . . Posted : 25 Jun, 2010 09:50 AM Thank you guys you have been helpful! The physical attraction was actually supposed to be taken the opposite way so I fixd that and talked a little more about my interests. The picture thing will be a working progress though. God Bless, Travis Lynch Post Reply
View Profile History	A Ladies touch. . . Posted : 25 Jun, 2010 06:19 PM Nice re-phrasing, Travis. Post Reply
View Profile History	A Ladies touch. . . Posted : 25 Jun, 2010 11:28 PM Don't forget to smile in your next picture Travis! You are quite a handsome young man and you need to show that. Check your spelling- just a couple of mis-spelled words, but that might make a difference to someone you'd really like to meet. Overall I found it to be very good. But get that smile working! Post Reply