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Would you consider......????Posted : 9 Jul, 2018 08:17 AMHello ladies. I have just a couple passing comments for you. |
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Jayzeee
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Would you consider......????Posted : 9 Jul, 2018 12:00 PMI've written my profile in order to attract some and put others off. My photos are set to private, so I'm quite happy for those who don't even look at profiles without a photo to pass me by. I'm 48 I know the relationship I want and I have a good idea of what I want my future to look like, ideally it would be shared with someone my own age up to 10 years older maximum. |
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Would you consider......????Posted : 9 Jul, 2018 06:13 PMAll those things you said about profiles and pictures apply to the men's profiles I've seen on here. And then some! |
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Would you consider......????Posted : 9 Jul, 2018 07:22 PMThank you for your responses. Would you care to take a look at my profile, and give me an HONEST critique? I can take it. LOL. Really. Let 'er rip. I want to be effective, and sure don't want to turn a "hopeful" off. So help me out a bit. |
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Jayzeee
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Would you consider......????Posted : 10 Jul, 2018 01:21 AMI think your profile is very well written, it gives enough information to spark an interest, and its not to long which is a plus in my books... :-) |
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Would you consider......????Posted : 10 Jul, 2018 05:50 PMHere are my suggestions and observations: I would put in more pictures. Your profile starts out with something negative "I just cannot take..." I would move that to the end. You also have several sentences specifically about family and empowerment. Obviously this is important to you, but it is out of place in a profile text. Save that for when you at least get to know someone, is my suggestion. Your statement that you are not anything at all like a tyrant, quite frankly, raises a big red flag for me. That seems to come out of nowhere. It is not related to anything else, so why do you say that? One other red flag, this being a Christian site, is your stating right off the bat that you are a LEO. You believe the alignment of the stars when you born somehow makes a difference as to the person God made you to be? Astrology is not something I would normally associate with a "servant of the MOST HIGH GOD". If you do believe it - keep it in. I am just making an observation. If that is not what you meant, you might want to rephrase. My last suggestion is to cut down on the details for the First Date section. Your first two sentences are perfect. Anything else an be shared in detail with your date. Hope that helps. |
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Would you consider......????Posted : 11 Jul, 2018 08:25 AMThat helps a lot. I really value your input. For the record, I do not follow astrology. But i do believe, by personal experience that folks born at the same point in a year, have common personality traits and characteristics. ;) |
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Would you consider......????Posted : 11 Jul, 2018 08:33 AMIs that better? :) |
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Would you consider......????Posted : 11 Jul, 2018 05:15 PMThe rewrite is shorter and to the point. Positive, and descriptive. Two thumbs up from this lady. |
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Moonlight7
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Would you consider......????Posted : 17 Jul, 2018 12:28 PMThere are too many profiles here with no photos. A photo should be a requirement to communicate with other members. Age is very important, being an older Lady I desire older gentleman. Age is not just a number. |
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PeacefulFaith
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Would you consider......????Posted : 21 Jul, 2018 07:55 PMI agree with you - Age is not just a number. It's reality. We all have a tendency to feel younger than we are but it's silly not to accept the reality of our age. |
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