Author	Thread: Hello, may I have advice on my profile description?
Ivory_Guitar View Profile History	Hello, may I have advice on my profile description? Posted : 18 May, 2011 11:58 PM I joined this site not too long ago, and I was wondering if there is a way to improve my description of myself. Thanks for any help. Post Reply
Rachel_Grace View Profile History	Hello, may I have advice on my profile description? Posted : 19 May, 2011 03:03 AM What are your likes and dislikes? Favorite color? Favorite food? Just quirky things about you that grab attention! What do you want in a significant other? What are some of your beliefs about Christ? Where do you want your relationship with Christ to go? :) Post Reply
Ivory_Guitar View Profile History	Hello, may I have advice on my profile description? Posted : 19 May, 2011 02:21 PM Thank you for the advice, Rachel. :) Post Reply
Miss_Wendy View Profile History	Hello, may I have advice on my profile description? Posted : 20 May, 2011 11:33 PM Hello Ivory, I definitely agree with Rachel about your profile page. A lot of the profiles on here are so short that you can't tell anything about the person. They all look the same. "I'm laid back. I like to spend time with firends. Want to know more? Message me." etc., nothing stands out about them. We look at one anothers' profiles to see what we have in common with one another. The only information we are going to know about you is what you tell us. What is something about you that makes you stand out from the rest? What are you passioante about? What are you doing with your life? What do you want to be doing with your life? What is your favorite story from the Bible? Why? What are some random facts about yourself? You know, little things that make up your character. You can look at it this way; what would you want to know about someone you potentially want to spend the rest of your life with? Give that kind of information to us. I hope that helps you a little. Have a wonderful night and God bless! :D Post Reply
Ivory_Guitar View Profile History	Hello, may I have advice on my profile description? Posted : 21 May, 2011 12:27 AM Thank you so much. Would you mind taking a look at my profile again and see if it's good now? I appreciate your help. Post Reply
Miss_Wendy View Profile History	Hello, may I have advice on my profile description? Posted : 22 May, 2011 12:18 AM Ivory, your profile is SO much better now! We know some things about you and and have been given a glimpse of who you are. It stands out. That's great! Now, there is only one more thing I see that it could use: You did mention that you want a wife but you didn't state any characteristics about her that you desire. We women want to know exactly what you want so we can see if it matches up with exactly what we want. lol. Yet, it goes so much deeper than the, "I want her to be a Christian, share my beliefs and be really pretty." Because, you see, we can assume that since you are on a Christian dating site that you value Christianity and want your potential wife to be one also, so in addition to that, what kind of character traits are you looking for in her? Fiery temper or Serene and sweet? Loving and gentle or Blunt and to-the-point? A woman who wants children or a woman who wants you all to herself? Old fashioned ideals or a modern woman? A helpmate to stand beside you or a woman that stays behind the scenes and makes you look good? Do you like a woman who makes the first move or do you believe that is the man's job? A woman who is more apt to daydream or a woman who thinks logically? Does she like reading or would she rather be out riding bikes and hiking? Do you want her to play an instrument? Sing? Dance? Enjoy picnics or going to museums? Not necessarily these exact traits but just things that are important to YOU in a wife. Qualities you want her to have. You want a woman to be reading your profile and be like,"Oh wow, he's great!" Then she continues to read on in your profile and see the woman you describe and shout, "Hey! That's me! We make a great match. I think I'll message him!" Also, you may go look at the profiles of some of the other members, male or female, here and see things that they have written that could give you some ideas. If you don't want the men to think you're a creeper you can always go into your, "Account Settings," icon in your options and switch it to where someone can't see that you've viewed their profiles. God bless and have a great night. Hope this helps. :) Post Reply
Ivory_Guitar View Profile History	Hello, may I have advice on my profile description? Posted : 22 May, 2011 01:24 AM Thank you, Miss Wendy. You certainly have helped. I added a few sections to my profile. Qualities I look for in a woman, qualities that women may like about me, and qualities they may not like about me. Post Reply
Ivory_Guitar View Profile History	Hello, may I have advice on my profile description? Posted : 22 May, 2011 01:38 AM Also, here's an interesting fact that you might like to know. As soon as I added those extra things you suggested recently, I received a wink a couple minutes later. Post Reply
Miss_Wendy View Profile History	Hello, may I have advice on my profile description? Posted : 22 May, 2011 09:49 PM Ivory, you're profile is officially awesome! Glad I could help. May I also mention that I also noticed that someone has even added you to their "favorites" list. Look at youuuu!!! Ivory, you are now in business. lol. Happy hunting and God bless. Post Reply
Ivory_Guitar View Profile History	Hello, may I have advice on my profile description? Posted : 22 May, 2011 11:04 PM Thank you very much. I couldn't have done it without you. :glow: Post Reply